Comments from tenguy

Date Story title Comment
2009-01-30 21:06:23 Fucking In the Park This was a totally idiotic story, like, ya know, maybe you should finish puberty before you try to write another.
2009-04-02 06:16:25 when we were Virgins This could have been a good story, your misuse of grammar and horrible spelling killed it. Try again by editing this story and correcting the errors.
2009-06-02 21:31:34 Great job, realism with fantasy, Rubinesk beauty meets Joe Blow, I loved it.
2009-09-02 14:20:48 Nora - The Second Chapter Another good job, as another poster suggested, write a novel, you'd do very well. As the other poster said about it being a fan club for you, he does not have a clue.

Keep it up, I know I will.
2009-11-01 06:30:23 Wow, SMC, a very powerful story.

If is indeed a story of actual events, it is an incredibly vivid depiction of a girls tormented childhood and her struggle to cope with the mixed feelings of love and betrayal.