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2017-05-08 23:58:09 I Am Pet_(1) Thank you, asha. I have many more and shall post them should the readers here continue to enjoy my work.
2017-09-24 19:04:08 Chace McCartson - Part IX_(1) I've read the entire series so far and I'm impressed. You've balanced violence and vanilla very well. You've made us want Erica, care about Candy and even like Chase. While some crave ever more dark acts, I think you are building to it. This genre is like that. The more a reader delves into the pit, the deeper he desires it go. Very engaging. I keep checking back to see if you've added to it. Hopefully you will soon
2017-10-23 09:01:41 Emergency Accomodations_(1) The hallmark of a great incest story is would it be a great story without the incest twist. Most often, the answer is no. Most writers of this genre rely on the taboo alone to carry the story. You went far beyond that. This is very well rounded and you being the reader in, making them feel the emotions. More dialog would have been nice, but you go to lengths to explain why so little was said. I don’t know if you intendes that to dive the issue but it did nicely. Your writing quality is excellent. Grammar and punctuation was spot on and formatting really made this long story easy to read. One of the best I’ve read here. Well done
2017-10-26 10:17:30 The Breaking of Tracy part 9 Tracy’s narrative really tied this up nicely. You put us in touch with her, giving her some much needed depth. One of the two best series I’ve read here. Chance Mc Carston being the other .
2017-10-26 10:17:56 The Breaking of Tracy part 9 Tracy’s narrative really tied this up nicely. You put us in touch with her, giving her some much needed depth. One of the two best series I’ve read here. Chance Mc Carston being the other .
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