Comments from snowleopard3200
|2012-09-09 15:23:53||THE MOON STONE, Part 2||Great story there; I am looking forward to the adventures continuing as it just gets more and more intriguing with each reading.|
|2012-10-02 19:45:07||The Yellow Sign.||excellent story - blends so much into one effort; wonderfully done.|
|2012-11-04 09:50:11||Helena's Nightmare||Great story - loved it from one end to the other.|
|2012-11-05 14:26:06||THE MOON STONE, part 3 (THREE)||You asked for commentary: Overall the story is good and continues with the previous two parts. Personally some of the slang felt out of place with the story context as a whole and some descriptions could be more flushed out.
Other than this its a wonderful tale being told for all of us to read. I wish a direct link to the other two parts could have been put in, but I do understand the limits of the site.
A wonderful job Hardrive.
|2012-12-27 07:43:10||Winters Dawning: Charity's Holiday to Remember||To the one seeking underaged girls, may the police find you and swing you from the end of a rope tied around your most private of parts as they drag you down the street to the police station.
Creatures such as you should be destroyed.