Comments from rodrigez88

Date Story title Comment
2008-06-04 14:37:43 JOYCE'S 15th BIRTHDAY It's a little hard to follow. The content of the story is good, but with all the punctuation errors, it's very hard to keep reading. I kept wanting to scroll down and get it over with.
2008-06-04 14:48:05 Just Right fuck an a! Excellent! Liked the style, and the substance.
2008-10-02 10:34:38 My Neighbors well done! This is one of my favorite stories on this site. There's some just crappy ones, some okay, (some that submit FAR too many), and then gems like this come in and get buried in the lot.

Well done! I honestly couldn't find fault with it.
2008-10-02 10:53:58 My Neighbors 2 this is good, but not as riviting as the first chapter! Keep it up!