Comments from Nightowl12398
|2008-05-08 15:19:50||Gayle's young wet pussy||I think you should repost the story but before you do so you need to read the story over and add missing words and in general add all the text that is missing.
|2008-05-23 09:11:55||My little latina - ch. 2||Thank you all for your really kind comments.
Chapter 3 is in the works but it will take some time since it is a bit more complicated then the first two.
"its good could be better though"
You forgot to tell me what is wrong with it and what needs to be done better.
|2008-05-23 09:07:46||My little latina - ch1||Thank you all for your kind words. :-)
Well chapter two is out.
Perhaps the genre should have been science fiction but I think not since there is no science involved but rather a mutation of the human mind. I will see about the graphics when I start serious work on chapter three. Psionics are more a natural phenomenon like f.ex. X-Men
About "Where the power came from". There is an explanation in a document stored in my profile. It's called "What is a psionic?"
I don't quite understand what you meen with "revenge motive" though. Enlighten me if you should read this.
|2008-05-23 08:52:06||What is a psionic?||A psionic's influence on a persons mind can be very subtle or very complex. It can also be very brutal and destroying.
In the case of Cassandra in the house she had been through a rough time and once his stimulation of her brain had removed her feelings of hate, depression, uselesness there was little left but love and vulnerability and as she saw him as a saviour and kind person all her love was pointed at him like an exploding bomb. So it only took her some hours to fall in love with him and it was a love that lasted them for a lifetime.
So he actually never "made" her love him but rather tought her to be sensitive, happy about little things and took away her bad feelings.
Hope this helps a bit in understanding why I still think it's a romance.
|2008-05-23 08:41:29||What is a psionic?||Yo, duuude. :-)
You talk way to fast and not being fluent in English makes me wonder if there is a dictionary available to translate "rofl, lmao, lol, kek... " and other such short phrases you throw at me. ;-)
I do agree with you on the chapter issue. As I have said in another comment I reckoned that most people here had read the story "Camp". I have since found out that this was a wrong assumption. For anyone that has read Camp my stories are logical. For those that have not my stories may sound unlogical.
In an environment controlled by a psionic love can come very fast due to his abilities and even without the psionic using any force and/or coercion.
A little modification and stimulation is all that is needed.
To be continued...