Comments from Nightowl12398

Date Story title Comment
2008-05-12 19:39:19 What is a psionic? Thank you kindly for your higly enlightening comment.

J. B.
2008-05-17 18:22:31 The House - Part 3 Thank you all for your comments. I'm running the whole idea of writing my own stories on schoolbook english. English is by far not my first language so I'm greatful for all the help I get from you people. You are right about "himself", I must have been quite tired when I wrote this story. Actually as I read it over after it was validated I found out there are quite a few other typos.

Kind regards
2008-05-19 04:27:11 The Barfly - ch. 1, rewrite Glad you liked my storie.
Chapter two is waiting for validation so it won't be long.
And as a treat, I hope, chapters 1 and 2 of the story "The Barfly" is also pending validation.

530 867... To you I would like to extend an opinion of Dr. Ruth.
"I don't believe in one night stands. A man can not be a good lover to a woman until the woman has tought him what she likes and enjoys".

I wish you all a prosperous week.

J. Bailey
2008-05-19 08:23:30 The House - Part 3 The flow is actually something I try to keep up when writing. When the flow is missing it is my hounest opinion that I have failed.

Yes the ending was ment to be romantic and if you are under the impression it was, then it means I have succeded to end the story as intended.

Kind regards
J. Bailey
2008-05-19 08:30:43 The House - Part 3 "ooh i loved that story my pussy is sooo wet and hot".

Now how is a writer to respond to a statement like that? ;-)

I have given the matter some thought and reached the following conclusion:
If you are a jerk trying to embarrass me I say "Grow up."

But if you are actually a woman and the story did have the described effect on you then you have given me the greatest gift of all. Being a man means I don't have the slightest inclination on what makes a woman hot. My only tools available are my feelings and my imagination. If those tools sufficed to have this effect I'll probably walk on a pink cloud for what is left of this day.

Especially since it would mean I'm on the right path with my stories. Porn accepted by both genders. Can't be wrong... :-)

Kind regards
J. Bailey