Comments from ExtremelyDisturbed

Date Story title Comment
2008-06-25 06:16:38 terminator the sarah connor chronicles johns adventures your story sucked. and saying that is even too much credit.
2009-06-26 07:32:50 The amazing doggy door. Fantastic. I loved it. Great work.
2012-03-30 16:45:00 Daughters Girlfriend Good Story but you need to work on sentence structure and punctuation.

Otherwise I enjoyed it.
2012-03-30 16:48:38 The Party - Part 1 You need to work on your story a bit more. It is too romantic and soppy. I felt like I wanted to slit my wrists. No Offence. But in future write a sex story for sex. Not a sex story for Romance