Comments from ExtremelyDisturbed
|2008-06-25 06:16:38||terminator the sarah connor chronicles johns adventures||your story sucked. and saying that is even too much credit.|
|2009-06-26 07:32:50||The amazing doggy door.||Fantastic. I loved it. Great work.|
|2012-03-30 16:45:00||Daughters Girlfriend||Good Story but you need to work on sentence structure and punctuation.
Otherwise I enjoyed it.
|2012-03-30 16:48:38||The Party - Part 1||You need to work on your story a bit more. It is too romantic and soppy. I felt like I wanted to slit my wrists. No Offence. But in future write a sex story for sex. Not a sex story for Romance|