Comments from Slippery Saddle Bum
|2008-09-04 04:01:27||A Kind Stranger||Very nice. It came across as a reflective and 'told frommemory' story', told with somewhat awkward and self-conscious wording.
As for READER 2008-09-03 17:04:53, go fuck yourself and you'll know where the fucking is. Next time, read the part at the top where it said "Non-erotic"
|2008-09-04 04:19:47||The Masseur||Very well written. How come he had you leave out the rest of the story, though? ... (There was definitely more.)|
|2008-09-10 08:07:08||I noted the observations of READER 2008-09-10 05:25:29, as well, but I had no trouble following what you were saying. I saw it as the workings of a complex mind and I respected it. .... made it more interesting, for me.
Superb story... I guess some readers didn't get the part about him crying, as he drove back into Columbus..... feeling the the terrible sense of loss for someone that he truly loved... combined with the heartbreak of knowing that he'd never see her again. Bittersweet memories.....
|2008-10-15 23:50:39||Absolutely excellent. ... My kind of story. The whole series was good but the ending was a masterpiece display of Justice, Reward and, most of all, Love... from here and from beyond.
I'm reminded of the Song of Psalms
"For Love Is As Strong as death.... It's jealousy unyielding as the grave
It burns like blazing fire.... like a mighty flame
Many waters cannot quench love. Rivers cannot wash it away"
|2008-10-13 16:42:45||To: READER
OK, Stephanie. Nice to see that you sneaked back in but remember the warnings, from other readers.
I'm not necessarily planning another story quite like that one, which is a rewrite of someone elses story but I'll keep your suggestion/request in mind, for other stories.
I'm glad that you liked this one.