Comments from Slippery Saddle Bum
|2009-01-24 09:07:32||Again to READER
And in case you weren't able to read my name on the last post, I'm Slippery Saddle Bum... the author of this story's re-write.
|2009-06-09 02:45:08||EXCELLENTLY done. You're one hell of a writer. Your description of their first full intercourse was perfect. I suspect that only someone who's actually experienced such a thing could have described it that way and so well. I'm as hooked as she and her daddy are.
Clean and professionally written. Absolutely beautiful work.
|2009-07-08 22:43:26||Dirty Whore||A resounding THANK YOU for not submitting more of your stories.|
|2009-07-08 22:43:49||Dirty Whore||A resounding THANK YOU for not submitting more of your stories.|
|2009-11-10 03:07:30||Threesome for Daddy||When they first started, how did Jess's pussy lips get into the scene? It was Kim and SARAH, wasn't it? PROOF READ and look for dumb mistakes like that before you post your stories. Amateur or not, there's no excuse for fucking up your own story. You ruined the mood before I could even get into it and now you're getting my opinion.|