Comments from Ghost Writer
|2009-03-06 13:35:00||Mom agrees to help pt.2||yungbeast18, no, I am not a professor. I am, however, someone who enjoys reading a story. I can't enjoy a story I can't read or follow. Its like you trying to enjoy a story you're trying to read but written in Mesopotamian or something. If you can't understand the squiggly lines and stuff that you're looking at, you can't very well enjoy the story.
Searching massive blocks of text for "cock," "pussy," "fuck," "oh yeah," and other similar words and phrases not more than five letters long isn't my idea of an enjoyable experience. Unlike some, I'm not one that gets my rocks off seeing "dirty words" among a mile and a half of indecipherable text.
If you don't like the comments, just read the story and don't scroll down this far, shit.
|2009-05-29 04:23:08||Injured Cousin||A very well written and entertaining story. Far from the usual rush of "Cock, pussy, fuck, fuck, cum" that pervades many of these stories.|
|2009-05-29 15:55:19||Injured Cousin||A very well written and entertaining story. Far from the usual rush of "Cock, pussy, fuck, fuck, cum" that pervades many of these stories.|
|2009-05-29 16:50:15||Young Whore||I really liked the story. It had proper spelling, punctuation, grammar and usage, for starters. I like to be able to understand what I'm reading, and not see lines of gibberish with the occasional, "ass, fuck, cock, pussy, cunt, cum, etc" thrown in. Secondly, the story had an actual plot, and I liked the use of flashbacks. You learned a lot about the character that way. Very well written and very enjoyable|
|2009-05-30 00:31:40||Spin the Bottle||This was the story of yours that I've liked the best so far. I enjoyed it|