Comments from Confusion816

Date Story title Comment
2008-05-06 23:22:24 Raven Ch. 1 - Self Exploration Thank you for the feedback, Johnny Lightnin.
I've noticed myself about the lengthy paragraphs but I just can't help it because I can never decide when to end it.

Trust me, this version has the edited paragraphs.

Thanks for the comment (which I wish I saw more of) and be on the lookout for the second chapter.