Comments from ANNONYMOUS_Z
|2008-08-31 18:33:45||Click||Stupid... the story line had potential, you must of been too horney when you wrote this... it just doesn't make sense...|
|2009-08-26 00:32:47||The Van||Yeah, i woulda liked it if the protagonist had gotten a bit lippy and Jean had tied him up and fucked him like the 19 year old... Good idea though|
|2009-08-26 00:43:36||Routine Questioning||Absolutly lvoe the concept but you seem to avoid the intimate bits a lot, drift over them. The diea of Adam is fantastic it's just too short and not very erotic...|
|2009-09-16 19:01:30||Pretty good so far - woulda liked it if they were a lil older but good so far - time for chapt 2
|2009-09-16 19:11:54||Not bad... not bad... Like the fact theres a tangeble stor ybut the gay parts should eb indicated in the themes ^^^^^ Time for part 3!