Comments from ANNONYMOUS_Z

Date Story title Comment
2008-08-31 18:33:45 Click Stupid... the story line had potential, you must of been too horney when you wrote this... it just doesn't make sense...
2009-08-26 00:32:47 The Van Yeah, i woulda liked it if the protagonist had gotten a bit lippy and Jean had tied him up and fucked him like the 19 year old... Good idea though
2009-08-26 00:43:36 Routine Questioning Absolutly lvoe the concept but you seem to avoid the intimate bits a lot, drift over them. The diea of Adam is fantastic it's just too short and not very erotic...
2009-09-16 19:01:30 Pretty good so far - woulda liked it if they were a lil older but good so far - time for chapt 2

2009-09-16 19:11:54 Not bad... not bad... Like the fact theres a tangeble stor ybut the gay parts should eb indicated in the themes ^^^^^ Time for part 3!