Comments from ejls

Date Story title Comment
2008-10-23 15:27:29 Boys Locker Room to My Room Good story, but instead of writing "He says, I reply, I tell him", please use quotes, and write it as a conversation. It will make for an easier read.
2008-10-23 15:30:31 Shower Surprize Excellent!
2008-10-23 15:37:48 Me and my sister.PT 1 Looking forward to Part 2. Slow it down a little and make more of an effort with your descriptions.
2008-10-23 15:42:55 Chocolate Fun! part 2 Are you having anyone read these before you submit? A second opinion might save you from the slamming you are getting in comments. Better than the first, but still a disappointment.
2008-10-23 15:45:32 There had better be a part 2! Too hot to let it stop there!