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2008-10-20 17:02:31 Harry Potter and the Sisters Black - The Complete Saga PART TWO I must say I’ve really enjoyed your story. There are few things that I would like you to keep in mind in future (I hope you’ll keep righting). Please stop writing in that horribly official style. Being polite is important, but don’t push it…
I don’t get Harrys character swings. He’s innocent and polite at one page, and he turns into a proper sadist on the next! If that was your intention, then I apologise, but it just doesn’t work for me. Ron was much more likable character.
And why on earth everyone is passing out every so often. Sex is not that exhausting.
You have good ideas and imagination. Keep writing!
2008-10-20 17:32:19 Harry Potter and the Sisters Black - The Complete Saga PART TWO I must say I’ve really enjoyed your story. There are few things that I would like you to keep in mind in future (I hope you’ll keep righting). Please stop writing in that horribly official style. Being polite is important, but don’t push it…
I don’t get Harrys character swings. He’s innocent and polite at one page, and he turns into a proper sadist on the next! If that was your intention, then I apologise, but it just doesn’t work for me. Ron was much more likable character.
And why on earth everyone is passing out every so often. Sex is not that exhausting.
You have good ideas and imagination. Keep writing!
2010-06-12 19:47:23 Amber won't do it again (Sequel) I agree with "READER 2010-04-14". Great story, but you have to hit “enter” before your characters start talking.
And I hope that Jim develops his sadistic streak :)
2010-10-31 10:32:09 Abusing Nadia - 2 One of my favourites. It has everything that I like in a story. Good grammar, no spelling mistakes. It’s well written. Characters are interesting and believable. What can I say... I loved it!
Can’t wait to read the rest.
Ps. My girlfriend climaxed three times when I read it her!
2010-10-31 10:37:10 Abusing Nadia - 2 One of my favourites. It has everything that I like in a story. Good grammar, no spelling mistakes. It’s well written. Characters are interesting and believable. What can I say... I loved it!
Can’t wait to read the rest.
Ps. My girlfriend climaxed three times when I read it her!
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