Comments from Trippindblds

Date Story title Comment
2008-12-17 21:24:38 My sister Alicia it's not a bad story, a little short. you need to put it into paragraphs to follow it a little easier.
2009-08-14 14:25:59 Forced Aunt u played it to easy, she didnt try to fight at all, and honestly do u think that she wouldnt be on guard for the next attack? and ur spelling is very poor use spell check it might help.
2009-08-21 08:52:22 My girlfriend and her cousin possibity to be a good story, whats with the Beeps? use the words that go there. U need to space between paragraphs. Names should be capalised (sp). Several words are incorrect (waste vs waist) etc. could of been better
2010-12-27 21:55:22 Lust for my sisterlaw before u post a story proof read it, and spell check it, makes for easier reading.
2011-03-29 15:48:42 thank you everyone for all the comments, but please keep in mind this story set is fiction it is not true, so there are no pictures and never will be.