Comments from Flodur

Date Story title Comment
2008-11-26 15:57:28 My Girlfriend's Payback enjoy the idea of the story, but would improve with a bit more detail.
2011-05-11 05:04:06 The Gang (The formation) Interesting comments with which i can agree, but I was aiming for realism, I hope you find chapter 2 more to your liking as I will introduce a calming influence of a character.
2011-05-25 20:26:29 The rape of my sister-in-law Liked the story, a little short.
2011-07-03 12:53:43 Writers Block Got to say one of the best stories on here, will have a lot to live upto with your next one. Cannot fault it.
2011-07-03 12:55:47 Writers Block 2 Got to say Rachael you are a natural at this stuff, not read the Principal yet, but will be hard not to judge it against this.