Comments from xBelovedx
|2008-12-22 20:28:25||Vampire Seduction 4||Well it was a pretty good story,
but honestly I didnt care for the ending like the others.
Although I will give you a positive rating, the ending gets
two thumbs down. Also I will say one thing in for advice
for future stories, if you use words that are more alluring
it'll make writing a better experience
also the readers will love it. Just a little imput,
you could take my advice or not. Truely thats your decision,
but dont stop writing its a great way to get out the fantasies
and desires you may not be able to in life, plus it gives
idea's to other readers as well for there experiences.
Sincerely, Jamie - f - usa
|2008-12-23 14:33:04||The Beginning||This story was really great,
kept me interested the entire time.
Hoping you continue soon,
|2009-06-20 01:49:31||I got a story to tell-part 1||Seriously, what was that? And that's just part one, oh god. I can definitely pass on the rest|