Comments from Irishpassion

Date Story title Comment
2009-01-29 22:31:12 Syphrice Don Vladimir's Chronicles pt. 3 Very good, especially like the way you did the hypnotic sequence.
2009-01-29 14:23:12 Syphrice Don Vladimir's Chronicals pt. 1 The story is good, just watch your syntax and tenses
2009-01-31 22:36:49 The Tiger and the Kitten Very nice, just the right touch
2009-02-03 19:33:46 Rachel - The Babysitter Excellent...perfect just the way it is.
2009-02-04 20:35:04 kidnapped and enslaved pt one good start, flows nicely