| 2009-01-27 00:04:44 |
Taking a Dump
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i was laughing insanely lmao |
| 2009-03-17 21:44:03 |
Warming Up
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not bad, but the writing seemed a bit too formal. i enjoyed it though. 7/10 |
| 2009-03-21 03:16:23 |
A Young Hitchhiker In A Blue Satin Dress
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Great writing skills, I'm excited to read your other stories. (: |
| 2009-03-22 22:54:23 |
Sarah and I
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i enjoyed it, but i do think that a better disciption is needed. also, pacing is a bit uneven giving the story a choppy feel. I do hope that you will continue, but if it's true why not place it all here? |
| 2009-03-23 00:20:42 |
Sailiing Into The Sun
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You have wonderful writing skills. I normally don't enjoy father/daughter stories but this had me going. i agree with the last comment, this story shouldn't be continued but i would like to see more from you. you could be similar to some of the great one on this sit (phrentic ice, slippery sadlle bum) |