Comments from subkittehslut
|2009-08-29 10:26:22||the naughty Mom||I read your profile... and it says that it will say in the title if you wrote it, and otherwise you're just posting the work of others. I applaud the story, it's very well-written, but I looked through everything you have posted and so far... you didn't write any of it. =/ Perhaps you should... anyway kudos to the actual writer.|
|2009-08-29 16:50:15||Raped by my own dog then left with an Itch||Kinda... glossed-over and non-violent for a dog 'rape'... I agree it needs more detail. The way it is now is kinda like... it takes what could be really intense subject matter and makes it almost dull. =/|
|2009-08-30 10:27:40||Bunk beds||Blah... generic... *yawns*|
|2009-08-30 10:41:19||Harry Potter and the Spellbook of Desires - Chapter 32 - Ancient History||I have loved all your stories so far, great job really in keeping it interesting! This is such a fun and deliciously deviant little series... keep up the good work!|
|2009-09-02 12:08:01||Crystal and to much achool||It's not that people are being overly picky, they are trying to help. Spellcheck is easy to use, and while it doesn't catch everything it helps a lot. Having to stop and make sense of what are not typos, like transposed/missing/extra letters, but misspellings, ruins the flow of a story and is offputting as far as the turn on goes.
That being said, pretty good story =)