The Love of a Cousin part 2
||You don't know how true this story is but I lost my true love my cousin several years ago from cancer. Please continue your fine work with several more chapters.
She loves her Daddy
||The story is good but needs more details pertaining what happened with the mother, is she working, watching or with someone else while you and the daughter play?
||Outstanding! A I said in the past; You have a way with writing love stories that brings out the true feeling of love. You could go foward to Ashley going to collage in the same town as Bruce where she moves in with him as his wife.