Comments from Mz.V.F

Date Story title Comment
2009-03-27 22:11:21 Was It Wrong? Part 1 Sorry I must have skipped that while i was reading, its hard to proof read it when you write it, im used to whats meant to be there in my head..
"dad just started at me" Is meant to be "dad just stared at me" and some obvious spelling mistakes.. and "pulled my hand towards me" is meant to be "pulled my hand towards him" but hey no-ones Perfect, i'll try not to stuff up part two!
2009-03-29 02:06:25 Was It Wrong? Part 1 Yea i did get a bit excited.. lol