Comments from BiStander

Date Story title Comment
2009-04-22 14:56:11 Obsessed with doing myself Honestly that was based on something that really happened to me and it never happened again, so I'd have to make something up for you. I might.
2009-04-28 12:49:41 April's Revenge A good story, thanks, but a better knowledge of grammar and a thorough proofreading would have improved it greatly.
Some comments, if I may. “gapping asshole” –“gaping asshole” ? The possessive of “my body” is “my body’s” not “bodies”; the latter is the plural. “it’s” is the contraction of “it is”; “its” is the possessive case. “started their decent” – “descent”? “call the shoots”?.
Good calls and you're right. Want to proof read? PM me.
2009-04-28 23:49:17 My Niece the troublemaker - Ch. 1 I made that previous comment and then realized I was logged out while reading the story. Why do you get logged out?
2009-05-01 10:54:38 My Neighor's Incest Keep looking for part two. It takes 4 or 5 days to get a story posted, plus I have to really proof read it. I noticed mistakes here just scanning it. I don't know how I miss them. Probably because I read it 50 times writing it and I read right over them.
2009-05-04 17:15:28 My Neighor's Incest I don't get it. 33,453 reads, but only 665 votes? Is it that hard to click the button?
Also, for you expert writers who see mistakes, point them out, because I obviously missed them and then maybe I will not make the same one again. Also include your username so I can see your stories. Thanks.
I spend way too much time on these for a below 80% rating.
Do you think there should be a 1 star to 5 star rating system? The other site I post on has that. That way it's not good or bad, only.

Part two is waiting validate, and part three is being reviewed.