Comments from xAznBoix
|2009-05-15 00:13:56||Fun Times with Rachel||Hey guys, thanks for all the advice and 'constructive criticism'. :D
Sorry if the chocolate chip cookies part threw you off. I tried to add a little, for lack of a better word, humor into it. Won't do it again next time.
Again, thanks for the tips and comments. It really helps. Especially for a first time author like me. Except another story coming your way soon. No food references this time. Even if I'm held at gunpoint....well, I'd probably give in then. =P
|2009-06-15 00:38:18||Fun Times with Rachel||Hey guys. I posted my second story and its currently waiting for approval. It's a lot longer than this one but differs in that it isn't incest. I took your advice and proofread it, which I should've done for this story also so sorry about that. I also left out any weird comments about food. In my opinion, I think the other story is much better than this one. So be sure to look for it in a matter of days.