Comments from Safe_Bet

Date Story title Comment
2009-07-10 14:29:50 California - The Introduction Wow. This reads almost EXACTLY like the first half of a story I read a couple of years ago. ????????
2009-07-14 19:38:56 A Goddess in Leather Well done! I usually don't care for rhyming poems because most poets moon/June/spoon you to death. You gave me gentle rhymes that didn't take away from the "feel" of the poem itself. Great meter and tempo, as well. Kudos.
2009-07-14 19:43:54 Little Girl I like your terse style. Good poem, scary subject. :)

P.S. Just me: I write about hetero sex.... that doesn't mean that I engage in it! ;)
2009-07-14 19:56:52 Lucia I agree with reader. Not bad, but a bit too wordy. It is almost lyric in places.
2009-07-19 09:23:37 Can't Rape the Willing Dear READER 2009-07-16 : You might want to re-read the poem. It is about standing up to bigotry and intolerance. "Rape" in this piece is used as a metaphor.