Comments from Ed Itor
|2012-09-03 19:13:07||Modern Mage - Chapter 14||Good spacing between the next action cycle and the last.
dathel0101, it is similar to what they do on Dr. Who when getting you ready for the next adventure cycle by explaining the whatnots of the story.
|2012-09-26 20:57:06||Me and my sisters friends||What's your age boy, I say what's your age?|
|2012-11-05 15:33:58||The Librarian and the Bartender||You are a very talented story teller, making your characters real and relate-able. This is definitely enjoyable and better than many posted here. A love story for any author's site.|
|2012-11-05 15:51:45||The Librarian and the Bartender, Part two||A good ending to a good story, even though I'm sure most knew it was Emily. Now you should really link a Librarian and a babysitter in a story.
Thank-you for a good read, now if only the Admins would only allow members to vote to prevent people from voting down stories.
|2012-11-10 16:39:17||Strawberry (Chap 10)||I'm just sorry that this became more about others then Strawberry and her momma. You should have called these stories "Kelly's Tail" and "Three Little ..."
But at least you didn't leave us dangling.