Comments from Ed Itor

Date Story title Comment
2014-05-18 18:33:32 Boy in the grass 58 Also considering what had happened to others, in Jazz's view maybe Tali could have died. Remember Tali is her twin and might not be as adroit as Jazz in charming people or even might rub some the wrong way.
A Good chapter and it allowed us a view into the 4 Mousketeers personalities and how & why they have become an extended part of this family. It also lets us know a bit about their family values too.

The interesting part of how this raid works out now begins and what happens to the children, the family, their friends and the authorities starts.

As for The Wedding, that would be The Happy Ending that Max deserves to have this finish on.