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Comments from Ed Itor

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Date Story title Comment
2012-08-03 21:39:46 My Pretty Little Slaves Do us All a favour no Capter 2, please.
2012-08-22 14:41:42 Together with Angela Pt3 I voted negative because including the Aunt was so predictable. You should have had them become lovers for a period of time first, then brought in others if that was your plan but no so readily/easily.
Next mommy will join and then he has a harem. Every writer here goes that way it seems. No originality.
2014-05-04 19:42:02 Boy in the grass 52 You missed an opportunity to use Evan's falling to his knees and shaking to frighten Thomas. You could have had Jenna ask that if Evan couldn't control himself and behave that maybe he needed more time with the convict. This would also allow the bonding with Thomas that you want. Right now the girls are treating the guys too softly for slaves that would be frightened of them for daddy dearest.
2012-09-03 19:13:05 Modern Mage - Chapter 14 Good spacing between the next action cycle and the last.
dathel0101, it is similar to what they do on Dr. Who when getting you ready for the next adventure cycle by explaining the whatnots of the story.
2012-09-03 19:13:07 Modern Mage - Chapter 14 Good spacing between the next action cycle and the last.
dathel0101, it is similar to what they do on Dr. Who when getting you ready for the next adventure cycle by explaining the whatnots of the story.
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