Comments from Odyssey Boy

Date Story title Comment
2011-03-04 09:02:55 Max and Trent in Love Very hot! I love when you call him your slut and such. Good story!
2012-10-01 14:10:59 A Grand Slam Please read carefully people. If you read it again, you will notice that Logan was naked first, not Ryan. So when Ryan got hard, he was clearly clothed. Then he got naked and so on. Second, Centimeters is also a part of the US measurement system. Please research things before commenting. Happy reading :)
2013-01-02 15:05:31 Hey everyone! I wanted to thank everyone for the comments and suggestions. I also wanted to let everyone know that posting this story was a mistake. I did not intend on posting this for a little while, but a laptop malfunction accidentally posted this early. The way I write is by starting off with a "free write" session, which is just writing without fixing, and that is what you see here. So I am sorry for the mistakes and everything that may not be right. I have asked for this one to be deleted, and then the better one will be posted soon after that! Continue to comment and suggest things though! Thank you everyone and enjoy!