Comments from Odyssey Boy
|2009-08-21 22:39:31||His Boy||Good story. I thought it was going to be more of a rape type story, which is not my thing, but it wasn't. Good writing. keep up the great work!|
|2009-08-17 23:26:12||Glad to see everyone is enjoying it. I can certainly get another chapter or two out of this! Thanks for the comments everyone.|
|2009-08-21 22:40:38||My auntie's Party||You are a talented writer. Please keep them coming. I really liked this story. But I do agree to a point. it did seemed a little rushed. Great regardless!|
|2009-09-25 22:46:29||Please make part two! :D|
|2009-09-29 20:00:41||Hey guys,
With this story, I added blowjobs. It was the first time I did such a thing so please keep that in mind. If this story is sucessful, or if people like it enough, then I will make a part 3. Please leave me comments and suggestions as to how I can improve. Thank you and happy jerking!