Comments from Aviat

Date Story title Comment
2009-09-26 04:08:39 Sexually Frustrated Wife You alternated between First- and Second-Person.
Either is fine, but stick with only one.
Otherwise nicely done.
2009-09-26 04:18:02 The Assification of Johannah Both thumbs up here!
2010-06-21 23:21:15 Amber won't do it again (Sequel) Mission accomplished!
2011-10-22 05:50:17 My Sister In Law Beth, Chapters 9 - 13 Read the whole series in one swell foop.;-)
Keep up the good work, and it's great to know you're situation is improved.
All the best.