Comments from dsnabsp
|2009-11-14 11:05:16||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3||To the "hott" reader, ;).
Sorry all my characters and stories are laid out already. She is actually made by a friend of mine and also. That character is not young, not a granny but not under the age of 25, and seeing how she acts and dresses, it just wouldn't fit her being a virgin. I will tell you this, There will be a virgin in story 4. Seems like a long ways away but theres tons of virgin stories to tie you over till then, ;). Also the more positive votes/comments I get, the more inclined I will be to write more. I like to people enjoy my work. Have a good day.
|2009-11-18 20:06:24||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 1||Question to all the readers who give it a negative. What could make the story better for you? Dont just leave a negative rating and not tell the author why. Please let me know so I can become a better author. I take positive criticism well.|
|2009-11-23 20:54:06||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3||Sorry I am a slow author. I am working on it dont worry. On another note, do you have any thoughts on the story thus far? besides it made you wet of course ha ha ha....|
|2010-04-30 21:16:06||Predator Series: The Beginning: Chapter 3||i have finished more chapters, reader, if you want to read the next chapter, you can contact me if your wish|
|2010-11-20 16:33:02||Predator Series: Chapter Five: Oh what fun||If you are going to leave a negative comment, PLEASE, please let me know why. This is also a setup chapter. It does not involve much anything.|