Punishing Rachel, Part One
||I liked how you started with the aftermath especially with the cliffhanger of how she will get through the night. Hoping for several more installments.
Is it so wrong
||Definitely the start of a good series. The idea of a reluctant pimp seems quite original to me.
Punishing Rachel, Part Two
||Seems like Josh as put a lot of thought into this yet obviously has no practical experience. Nice touches with bringing that out. (i.e. The modified cat woman cap not working on thick hair.)
||Your story has touched me rather unexpectedly. Growing up in an alcoholic home I know all too well the price of voicing an opinion and looking some someone to see the real me. I look forward to reading more of Anna's story.