Comments from cherokee4000
|2012-11-18 21:46:55||The Beauty of Friendship||The "A's" are quote marks. It probably looks okay to her.|
|2013-07-06 11:30:11||Seducing My Virgin Sister||You have great potential but your writing is stilted. Put away the thesaurus for a bit and just flow with it. Work details in tangentially.
The two biggest suggestions I have are read more and write more.
|2013-09-20 18:17:27||When lust takes over||I wish I could read French so I could read the original.|
|2013-12-31 05:09:35||My Naked Doppelganger (PART 3)||How do you down vote 4 times?|