Comments from cherokee4000

Date Story title Comment
2012-11-18 21:46:55 The Beauty of Friendship The "A's" are quote marks. It probably looks okay to her.
2013-07-06 11:30:11 Seducing My Virgin Sister You have great potential but your writing is stilted. Put away the thesaurus for a bit and just flow with it. Work details in tangentially.

The two biggest suggestions I have are read more and write more.
2013-09-20 18:17:27 When lust takes over I wish I could read French so I could read the original.
2013-12-31 05:09:35 My Naked Doppelganger (PART 3) How do you down vote 4 times?