Comments from lifeslayer696

Date Story title Comment
2011-07-18 08:20:23 Pictures The idea is really good!!! But, as the other guy said, you shoud put more description in it... Keep writing though...
2011-07-18 08:38:25 Pictures: 2 This was very good!!! Improved with respect to the previous one. I'm waiting for more...
2011-07-26 04:05:52 Dirty Girl Very well written!! I like more complex plots but i liked it very much.
2011-07-27 10:23:03 OFFICE SURPRISE Incredible story. Very good indeed. I'm not really a fan of domination and submission, but i liked it very much. I love how you write!!!
2011-11-02 11:01:08 How to pay the rent Great story!!! You must go on!!!