Just Getting Started
||That story was so hot that it could melt ice...I know tahts a bad pun but holy cow that was a nice story.
||This story is one of the best I have read on this site. Keep it up. I really like the idea of twins doing each. As a friendly suggestion my add the dad in too?
Like Father Like Son Pt.1
||It was extremely good. I do agree with Rebel no double spacing and a little more detail. BTW I would LOVE a part two.