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2010-04-06 00:14:33 Punk Slut Sis All I can say is "Wow." This is one of the best stories I've read around here in a while. You did such an amazing job capturing these characters and making them fleshed out. The interactions were so much fun to read. I couldn't stop until I was all the way done.

You have a serious gift, I'm not kidding or just saying that because the story was "hot" or "sexy." But you really did write something spectacular. Regardless of how absurd and crazy the plot was, it felt real and somewhat normal in this Punk culture and community. Thank you for writing such a brilliant and fun story.

I saw that you said there is no sequel. I hope that doesn't mean you won't write one. Honestly, I would be very sad if there is no follow-up to this story. These characters deserve so much more. I feel like I need to know what happens, because I'm sure you could create something just as great as this story, without getting cliche or boring.

Please continue this series. I beg of you! <3
2010-04-06 00:16:44 Punk Slut Sis Okay, so apparently I can't put quotes or less than signs in the comment, otherwise it just shows the coding behind the symbol. So the " is really a quotation mark, while the <3 at the end is me attempting to make a heart. Just wanted to clarify.

Again, please consider continuing this series. You'd do XNXX a huge favor by doing so.
2010-11-20 04:29:15 Bedroom Pet It makes me sad that you copied "Bedroom Pet" word for word. You should have re-written it your own way.

I do like your Bedroom Pet 2, though. You did well with it. Plagiarizing, however, is not cool. I have to give this story negative feedback, but I've given YOUR sequel positive.
2010-11-20 04:29:25 Bedroom Pet It makes me sad that you copied "Bedroom Pet" word for word. You should have re-written it your own way.

I do like your Bedroom Pet 2, though. You did well with it. Plagiarizing, however, is not cool. I have to give this story negative feedback, but I've given YOUR sequel positive.
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