Comments from Rinoscope
|2011-07-10 20:48:16||Blindfolds Aside||Really really nice.
A real story, that put us in the head of the character, we can live with them, feel for them.
A tiny thing you can look out for, is doing proof reading, or have it done by someone. A few things escaped your eyes, probably because you have it written in your head and your fingers weren't as fast!
Great story anyway, like most of your work. Can't wait the follow up of the Everything for my sister serie.
|2011-07-14 09:34:18||Blindfolds Aside||Way to go Danejarous, don't let a blind monkey get into your way, you know how to write at more than a decent level, and I hope you continue.|
|2011-11-29 13:39:27||MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 11 DINNER & A MOVIE (REVISED)||You guys are such horrible c**ts. You can't wait, you need everything now, to forget it after you're done with it. Stories don't write themselves, you have to think to deliver the quality of Tamperer's plot. Please calmly wait for him to bring us another good moment. He didn't disapoint in the past and came back, you have no idea about his personal life. Be patient, re-read the story while you wait.
|2011-11-30 13:45:43||MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 11 DINNER & A MOVIE (REVISED)||Oh because you come back and complain because you don't like his writing? You're even more stupid than I thought. Stop acting like everything has to be handled to you, he has a life, he is the writer of the story and write when the fuck he pleases. And go vent your stupid anger somewhere else. Damn, aren't kids getting anger management classes these days?
Plus what if he said next wednesday and he didn't ? You think inspiration grows on trees? He might think his readers deserve more than what he had in mind and is refining his work. Or just reading the comments and laughing at you whimpering like puppies.
|2011-12-01 11:10:17||MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 11 DINNER & A MOVIE (REVISED)||Quote please? I never said anything like that. As someone said before, he may have job issues, or RL issues, and think it is of more importance to get it sorted than working on the story. Hopefully this will settle down and he will come back with another great chapter.|