Comments from Mrtroll

Date Story title Comment
2010-03-20 21:27:15 Wall of text makes it impossible to read.
2010-04-05 17:27:17 The Slave Princess Part 4 Generally speaking I have found that fantasy genre (and I mean that as stories set in a fantasy world) tend to be quite cheesy and poorly written. This series, however is quite well done and very arousing. I have enjoyed it thus far. Keep up the good work.
2010-04-05 17:32:02 The Plane Crash Pt.8 I have found this series to be very good so far. I have been watching for new chapters as you post them.

You do have a lot of characters to keep track of, but you have done a good job with differentiating them from one another so they are easy to keep track of.

My only bit of criticism is that I wish that each part contained more, but I guess that's more of a compliment. Good work.