Comments from Eric the Red

Date Story title Comment
2011-05-25 10:59:32 "Below, have you ever thought he may have a second name which he uses to write under? Have you checked his profile for instance? Have you ever heard the phrase "Look before you leap"?"

WOW! Someone thar actually read the Rebeca Lewis profile, and knows that I am a man.
Thank you for that. :)
2011-05-26 14:20:57 "Hey. Your intro doesn't make sense. If you were really Rebecca Lewis, a woman, why would you call yourself Eric and post your gender as male. Makes no since at all. Even your contact info is under a man's name. Just seems like a sorry attempt to make it look like you didn't steal somone elses work. You might as well post the remaining chapters all at once. Your not fooling anybody into thinking you are posting chapters as they are written. I'm just sayin...... "
(sigh) I never claimed that I was writing it as I go, but I am re-editing it as I go because the first time I posted it under my “pen-name”, you may have heard of those, it was full of mistakes.
I actually chose the name Rebeca because of the first story that I posted here, Becky’s after school surprise, and I deliberately misspelled it as a clue that this was not my real name.
I KNOW that I wrote this so you can think what you want
2012-05-03 01:24:55 Spanking Amber "my 7yo step daughter just came in sat on my lap and ask what i was reading. OMG!!"

Damn! That's just wrong, so, so, wrong.
2012-07-08 18:31:39 Daddy's Sleepy Time Surprise First, and foremost, I fucking love daddy/daughter role play, really all little girl/older man role play rocks, but most especially daddy/daughter.
As to the story, I would integrate the POVs into a third person narrative, and not mention that it's role play as that takes the reader out of the fantasy.
The little note at the top stating that it was inspired by a role play scenario covers it.
Keep writing. =Dg
2012-10-14 06:39:28 Wake up baby girl: Part four He slipped his hand down her back to squeeze her tight little butt, and he noticed her panties were damp toward the crotch so he slid his hand down the crack of her ass, and was almost shocked to find that her pussy had become so juicy while sucking his cock that the crotch of her panties was soaked through.

That's the full paragraph, and it does start right where the other left off.