Comments from Eric the Red
|2010-03-21 19:27:21||Yeah, I think it's just a story brittney, and although your concern is touching, I believe "u" is spelled you.
I mean, it's not a hard word.
|2010-05-15 18:52:35||Great job, as usual.
I can't wait for your next story. ;)
|2010-05-28 21:32:35||Just me, second part||I can't wait to read more.
Trust me, your posts are far from boring.
In point of fact they are quite exiting, and I look forward to the next installment with baited breath.
|2010-06-10 13:54:39||Just Me for the third time||You are such a naughty little princess to end it on a cliff hanger like that, but on the other hand, I'v done worse to my readers, so I guess I deserve it. ;)
Can't wait to see what happens next.
|2010-06-19 23:43:26||Surreal First Night||Good concept, well written, but the end felt a little rushed.
If you are going to take the time, and care to set up a sex scene, take a little extra time on the actual sex.