Comments from Death of Hope
|2010-11-22 23:42:32||The Girls of St Francis the Martyr. 1 The Field Trip||The "rape parts" were necessary for the conflict of the story. They were just as well-written and engaging as the rest of it. This is a great one. Waiting on Part 2. When will it be up?|
|2010-11-28 23:27:20||The Girls of St Francis the Martyr. 1 The Field Trip||Another great one, NTG. How is the sequel coming along?
The non-violent/coerced sex is definitely more enjoyable to read than the violent and coerced stuff, but the rape is necessary for the story to have a good plot and conflict. I enjoyed the whole thing.
Keep writing. It continues to amaze me how you come up with your ideas.