Comments from hotjohn4321

Date Story title Comment
2010-05-19 14:17:14 The Beginning Ch 1 Like the story line and easy to read. Helps with my writing.
2010-05-21 09:43:10 This is a very good story and I like the romance. Will read more of your work.
2010-07-18 17:47:00 Well written and seems to have some fact to it. The dialog is good.
2010-07-19 17:34:08 And so it began... Interesting story and point of view. Hard to grasp some of the POV.
2010-07-19 17:49:24 Teasing Daddy's Friend Until He Can't Take Anymore good story gave me some ideas