Comments from e3snoopy
|2010-09-06 06:15:07||Mrs Lyndsey Dunn||A bit short. Too little build-up and lots of spelling errors. But otherwise a very good story.|
|2010-09-06 06:33:22||Mrs Lyndsey Dunn 2||If this is supposed to be a sequel, it should be consistent with part 1. Much of the contents of part 2 is contradicting the contents of part 1.
Sorry, but although the overall storytelling aspect was better in part 2, the inconsistencies made it a bad story.
|2012-06-19 06:11:21||Great story! Both happy and sad at the same time. A childhood dream fulfilled only to be lost again.|