Comments from e3snoopy

Date Story title Comment
2010-09-06 06:15:07 Mrs Lyndsey Dunn A bit short. Too little build-up and lots of spelling errors. But otherwise a very good story.
2010-09-06 06:33:22 Mrs Lyndsey Dunn 2 If this is supposed to be a sequel, it should be consistent with part 1. Much of the contents of part 2 is contradicting the contents of part 1.
Sorry, but although the overall storytelling aspect was better in part 2, the inconsistencies made it a bad story.
2012-06-19 06:11:21 Great story! Both happy and sad at the same time. A childhood dream fulfilled only to be lost again.