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Comments from dav31092

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Date Story title Comment
2011-05-12 10:45:09 My Lovely twin Part 2 I know I need to work on my grammar. and Anon your are right i do not care much about my work, but I am going to change that, and as for the format i am going to fix it.
2011-05-21 13:32:38 My True Love There are a number of things you need to do.

1. Format better.

2. Make your stories longer.

and 3. Do not have a character say something you already did.
2011-05-21 13:37:39 My True Love There are a number of things you need to do.

1. Format better.

2. Make your stories longer.

and 3. Do not have a character say something you already did.
2011-05-21 22:48:11 My 25 year old boyfriend I gave a negative vote because of A the format and B the story didnt do it for me,
2011-05-21 22:49:17 Moms Sleepmask Secrets I gave this a positive rating because it was well written but my only downside was that the story was kinda dull.
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