The Cheater Vol 2 - Caught in the Act
||Check out the next one, A Woman's Touch
Tommy and Jade
||Awsome, you have to continue that.
||Loved it. I have little experience (and what I do have is pretty poor) with this writing and short stories like that really give me a point in the right direction. I'd love to hear more!
Taryn's a whore
||For all the themes you've added I would've thought it would be longer but I'm underwhelmed by what happened in it. How could this kid get a girlfriend if this is what his mind works like? It just doesn't seem realistic.