Comments from dark_knightpd

Date Story title Comment
2008-12-13 19:09:08 The trip of a lifetime , Part 1 thanks for the comments people, its appreciated. bad ones are also welcome though, criticism is always good. working on part 2 at the moment.
2008-12-16 18:49:00 Window Shopping that was pretty good, i enjoyed that alot!
2008-12-20 05:17:00 The trip of a lifetime, Part 2 thanks people, please do leave comments and criticism, its appreciated, part 3 will arrive soon