Comments from Magisex21
|2010-07-02 05:31:36||Ben 10 and the New Alien chapter 4||Great story, Love uncle Gary. The characters' personalities are really coming out. Still have several chapters to read, and hope the series keeps getting better.|
|2010-07-02 05:49:13||Ben 10 and the new alien chapter 5||To READER
2008-02-05 21:56:42; you don't know what you're talking about.having a strong storyline elevates this series beyond smut that's all about sex, and into the realm of erotica, where you don't need to have sex in every single chapter.
Good work, man.You raised this series to a new level.
|2010-07-03 16:38:54||Dragon||A very good first story, you should write more, maybe a misguided 'knight' sent to rescue her from the dragon?|
|2010-07-03 16:55:21||A Little Sisters Yearning, Pt. 1||Did some of these posts make you sick, or what? I mean, really! I can almost see the authors drooling! Hey guys! it's a FANTASY. Get a hold of yourselves.|
|2010-07-05 23:37:35||keep your tense consistent, either 1st person or 3rd, don't switch in the middle.|