Comments from LikesItSucked
|2010-09-29 07:45:34||Jayson||Good, quick, story. I thought the stripping in the mirror to be a little contrived, but it still worked well.
One more thing, you readers leave a comment. Pos/Neg votes are good, but the comments are what helps improve the story.
|2010-09-26 07:53:32||Power Tools Day 01||The story's too robotic, just like the character. Lost me about halfway through.|
|2010-09-30 05:30:15||A Family Thing part 2||You tell a good tale, nicely paced and finishing well. I don't know that Live should get pregnant again ... they seemed to be pretty much in agreement about the vasectomy, and it fit the storyline well. You write what you write - thoroughly enjoyable.|
|2010-10-02 05:47:06||Instant Messenger 1||I normally don't care much for stories told in 3rd person, but it fit the setting in this one. Not bad, not bad at all.|
|2010-11-16 06:16:57||Tribe||I see that putz chilldude74 is using the comments as his personal billboard again.
It was a good story, but a little hard to read because of the lack of emotion. Flat, no excitement to it at all.